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Bitter
I have just finished writing the best Jewish children"s story ever written. It's still unabridged, unedited and unrevised, and it will need a lot of all three. but it's done.
If you pm me and i'm in a magnanimous mood, i'll sent it to you.
Bitter
And as the starter of this topic, I hereby dedicate it to the discussion of the story, which many people, (let's be honest here) indulged my ego by requesting.
accolade
As I recall, the last story you published here was really good.
Bitter
QUOTE(accolade @ Jan 23 2008, 10:33 PM) *
As I recall, the last story you published here was really good.

Thank you.
mosheshmeal
QUOTE(Bitter @ Jan 23 2008, 03:21 PM) *
I have just finished writing the best Jewish children"s story ever written. It's still unabridged, unedited and unrevised, and it will need a lot of all three. but it's done.
If you pm me and i'm in a magnanimous mood, i'll sent it to you.

Perhaps you should send it to Madonna and she’ll have it published under her ‘Esther’ name.

mosheshmeal
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existwhere?
Bitter- it was very interesting.
It hit home in many ways. Some of it was "ouch", and some a wonderful tribute to our community.

Your characterization of Moshiach bothers me, I'm not sure why. Maybe it's that I'm used to Moshiach being discussed with a lot more seriousness, and this strikes me as bordering on leitzanus. But the story is definitely imbued with Torah values, especially chessed.
Bitter
QUOTE(mosheshmeal @ Jan 23 2008, 10:44 PM) *
Perhaps you should send it to Madonna and she’ll have it published under her ‘Esther’ name.

mosheshmeal
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whatepis madonna?
QUOTE(existwhere? @ Jan 23 2008, 10:55 PM) *
Bitter- it was very interesting.
It hit home in many ways. Some of it was "ouch", and some a wonderful tribute to our community.

Your characterization of Moshiach bothers me, I'm not sure why. Maybe it's that I'm used to Moshiach being discussed with a lot more seriousness, and this strikes me as bordering on leitzanus. But the story is definitely imbued with Torah values, especially chessed.

What was ouch? bad writing or disagreeable content?
mosheshmeal
QUOTE(Bitter @ Jan 24 2008, 12:06 AM) *
whatepis madonna?

Madonna writes children's books. Didn't you know?!

mosheshmeal
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existwhere?
QUOTE(Bitter @ Jan 23 2008, 11:06 PM) *
What was ouch? bad writing or disagreeable content?

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